Hey Erin, the pictures that you have captured thus far are amazing. You really give the viewers an inside scoop of your sister's life as a mother. I think that you did an excellent job of capturing emotions of both your sister and your niece. I really like that you include all aspects of their daily life. It makes your essay more real and relatable.
As for moving forward, I would recommend would just narrowing down the specific order in which you would like to present the photos. - Maybe in order of morning to night time? Other than that I think that you are doing a great job with this project and it looks like you and your sister are doing a lot. I am looking forward to seeing what you post next for this assignment!
My name is Erin and I am currently a Sophomore at UCBA. I am a psychology major and decided to take this class as an elective. I recently ...
Hey Erin, the pictures that you have captured thus far are amazing. You really give the viewers an inside scoop of your sister's life as a mother. I think that you did an excellent job of capturing emotions of both your sister and your niece. I really like that you include all aspects of their daily life. It makes your essay more real and relatable.
ReplyDeleteAs for moving forward, I would recommend would just narrowing down the specific order in which you would like to present the photos. - Maybe in order of morning to night time? Other than that I think that you are doing a great job with this project and it looks like you and your sister are doing a lot. I am looking forward to seeing what you post next for this assignment!
- Lydia