Erin, I love the story you are telling! The raw emotions of joy and exhaustion in each photo really depict what motherhood is said to be, and you're capturing it well with each angle and lighting. My favorite photo is the last one because it's the perfect representation of the decisive moment that we covered in class.
Shot 3 if you could try to recreate the shot without your knee, and maybe a rearrangement of the photos. I'd make the fourth photo the last. Also, I'd incorporate the photo from the first progress, were you sister is holding your niece and you can see the bracelettes, into your final sequence. Possibly even as the first photo. Besides that, I dont have many suggestions for how to make it better. You're doing amazing, keep it up!
My name is Erin and I am currently a Sophomore at UCBA. I am a psychology major and decided to take this class as an elective. I recently ...
Erin,
ReplyDeleteI love the story you are telling! The raw emotions of joy and exhaustion in each photo really depict what motherhood is said to be, and you're capturing it well with each angle and lighting. My favorite photo is the last one because it's the perfect representation of the decisive moment that we covered in class.
Shot 3 if you could try to recreate the shot without your knee, and maybe a rearrangement of the photos. I'd make the fourth photo the last. Also, I'd incorporate the photo from the first progress, were you sister is holding your niece and you can see the bracelettes, into your final sequence. Possibly even as the first photo. Besides that, I dont have many suggestions for how to make it better. You're doing amazing, keep it up!