I'm going to discuss the first image: You found a good texture & there's good contrast of the gray with the 2 dark vertical lines. You could use a strong focal point and maybe experiment a bit more with the placement of the 2 dark elements. As they are positioned now, they create a too balanced, static composition. Keep trying! Some other images look like you could use a higher aperture to get everything is sharper focus.
I see that you used texture well. Overall a melting pot of textures and shades of brown and grey that lead to some very pleasant images all throughout. The 3rd and 4th image could benefit from a little more exposure but, throughout very consistent in style.
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I'm going to discuss the first image:
ReplyDeleteYou found a good texture & there's good contrast of the gray with the 2 dark vertical lines.
You could use a strong focal point and maybe experiment a bit more with the placement of the 2 dark elements. As they are positioned now, they create a too balanced, static composition.
Keep trying!
Some other images look like you could use a higher aperture to get everything is sharper focus.
I see that you used texture well. Overall a melting pot of textures and shades of brown and grey that lead to some very pleasant images all throughout. The 3rd and 4th image could benefit from a little more exposure but, throughout very consistent in style.
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